Friday, December 10, 2010

Bomb in the Building

          It was a dark night in the town of Chicago and someone was roaming in the shadows. It was no other than Jack Horn and the detective was William Turner. At Jack went into a bomb store called The Bomb Store. Then he bought the best bomb there called the Explosive 10,000. But there were two people with him named Fred, and Scott. Right when they left the store William went right into the store to look for clues. He found a thumbprint of Jack that was on the counter. Then he left the store. When Scott and Fred were at Jacks house they were talking about something. At Fred left Jacks house. At Scott left Jacks house. The next day they all met up in an alley but as soon as William got there they were nowhere to be found.
  all of the sudden a massive explosion came from the Empire State Building. There were over 300 people in the building. After the explosion William went in the exploded building. There where 56 people who died and the rest where severally injured. William knew it was a mystery that had to be solved. When William went in the building he investigated and found fingerprints of Scott all over.
 So the owner of the Empire State Building said, “Can you tell me who blew my building up?” So William thought about the suspects he eliminated Fred because he hadn’t found any finger prints, and he didn’t buy the bomb. the two main suspects were Scott, and Jack.
 The suspects’ alibis were that Scott didn’t buy the bomb. But Jack wasn’t there when it blew up. William knew the solution would come from the clues. The witness was Bob the one who saw them blow the Empire State Building up. So then he gathered up the evidence and he figured out that Jack was the one who blew up the Empire State Building. He found it by putting all the clues together and found it out.
                                                                                                  

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  3. I think that my mystery story isn't like a super good story. But at least it's a mystery. am I right.

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