Friday, December 10, 2010

                     Avery and the Invisible Lion
     
            There once was a boy named Avery Lewis and he is 11 years old and he lives in Baltimore, Maryland. Avery also had a pet lion his name was Marvin. One day when Avery took Marvin for a walk. One problem was whenever Marvin saw a dog he would roar louder then 10,000 elephants blowing their trunks as loud as possible. When they were walking Marvin saw two dogs he roared 2 times super loud. Then he saw 13 dogs in a whole pack. He roared so loud that time that it blew the eardrums out of the people in China. So Avery took Marvin back to his house so that he wouldn’t roar any more.
            The next day Avery had to feed Marvin. Marvin usually eats a 2 ton truck load of food a day. Avery gave Marvin his food but when Marvin was done eating Marvin wanted more food. But Avery only buys that much in one day. He only has enough money to buy the food for a day. But Marvin started to get furious. Then Marvin got the idea of eating Avery. But Avery bought some invisibility powder from a comic book. So Avery knocked over the powder onto the floor by accident. Then Marvin started to eat the invisibility powder. Then Marvin turned invisible! There was some good news and some bad news. The good news was that Marvin wasn’t hungry anymore but the bad news was that Marvin was invisible.
            The next day Avery didn’t know that Marvin was hungry. Then Marvin started to get suspicious because he didn’t have his food. Then he was really mad so Marvin jumped up onto Avery with his sharp claws. Avery was scared but at that very second a strange man jumped in through the window. His name is Andrew Manning He came all the way from Indianapolis. He is stronger than 100,000 elephants in a big herd. Then Andrew said “were is he at”? Then Avery said  
            “He’s right on top of me”! Then Andrew jumped right onto Marvins back. Then Marvin fell over on the ground and Andrew sprung on top of his stomach. Marvin tried to kick and scratch him but Marvin just couldn’t pull it off. Just then Avery got up off the ground and jumped onto Marvin head and he tried to hit Marvin but he got flung off by Marvin. But Andrew was to strong even for Marvin. So Andrew put him in a big cage with some food. Then Andrew called the closes zoo to come and pick up this lion. Then the people from the zoo came to pick up Marvin. Avery was really sad to see his lion that he’s had since he was 6 years old. Avery couldn’t bare to watch them take him away. When they took Marvin to the zoo Avery became heartbroken because it was the first night Marvin wouldn’t be sleeping with Avery. Then Avery had a plan to break Marvin out of the zoo.
            The next day at Avery woke up and went to the National Region Zoo. An hour has past and Avery still hasn’t found Marvin. 26 minutes later Avery found Marvin but he was in a giant iron cage. There was a lock on the cage but Avery took a lock picking class at school he was the best at. But Avery had nothing to pick the lock with. Then he just found a little paper clip n the ground so he bent the paper clip into the form that he needed it to be. He picked the lock and set Marvin free. One problem was that Marvin was asleep and the only time he’d wake up is in the morning. Avery pushed him over to wake him up. He tried with all his might but he just couldn’t wake him up. So Avery started to make something in a bottle that would wake him up. But it took him 2 hours to make. By the time he was done making the thing in the bottle it was already so he had to work quick. But Avery decided to keep Marvin there because he seemed happier and he didn’t want him to attack him anymore. So then Avery gave up on trying to break him free. Then he locked the cage again and said “goodbye Marvin” he said very sadly then he left. When he got back home he went into his room and started to cry. Then he thought of an idea of getting a new lion. But he didn’t want to bring back bad memories of Marvin. So he didn’t get a new lion instead he looked at a scrapbook of him and Marvin having fun. That brought back good memories.
             He had also thought about getting a dog it was a tough decision to make but Avery was sad without Marvin. The reason he got a dog is because he didn’t want to be sad anymore. So he went to the pet store and he found a perfect dog for him. The dog that Avery picked out was a golden retriever. It was a perfect dog and she was beautifier that the prettiest flower in the whole entire world. So Avery took his dog home when he got he thought to himself
“What will I name her”? Then he named her Sheila. On the day of January 10th is Averys birthday was today and Sheilas birthday to! Avery gave Sheila a brand new chew toy and Sheila gave Avery a lick on the face. Then Avery thought to himself.
“Why didn’t I go and save Marvin”? Even though he didn’t get to spend the rest of his life with Marvin he still has great memories of him and Marvin with each other. They loved each other very much even though Marvin tried to eat him. But he was still happy with his dog Sheila.                                                                                                   
                            
                                               

3 comments:

  1. To me a Tall Tale is supposted to be a creative story. But when I wrote my story I thought that it was pretty darn good even though I don't have much of a imagination. I think that this story is sad at some points, a little action, and some suspence in the story. This is lierly the best story that I've ever typed!!!

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  2. You have a imagination.you just have a black oops imagination.

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  3. what happend to Avery that is a little wierd you know

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